Broken Hearts 2 Updated Part – 1

PART – 1

Bidding was going on for the auction of one bunglow. When a car entered into the premises.

“50 crore.” his smooth and velvety voice shut every bidder’s mouth.

All turned around to look at the source and she knew without even looking at him. All start whispering about him. His aura was commendable. His steps calculative like a lion on hunt. His eyes were cold and face stern.

He removed his shades and all lowered their lashes. No one could meet the heat of his glaring eyes. But his eyes fixed on his target. Every voice, every person seemed invisible for him.

Mrs. Raisinghania I am back.” He whispered and a strong wind just touched her.

She knew that a storm named Maan Singh Khurana entered her life once again. She glanced up and their eyes met.

He wasn’t the same teenage boy to whom she loved the most. That was a sweet boy. And this one is a strong person who is filled with vengeance.

She closed her eyes and a tear drop rolled out. “I know why you are here Maan. You want to punish me.” She thought and memories took her back in past.

Flashback

An 18 year old beautiful girl entered into a small flat. She has the keys though this flat doesn’t belong to her. “Maan, damn it. Ghar ki kya halat bana rakhi hai.” She cursed the person who lives there. And quickly start cleaning. She put things in their places.

“Better.” She said and at the same time feels the cage of arms around her.

“So finally you are here.” She swirled into his arms and kissed his cheek.

“Mujhe to aana hi tha na Geet.”

Flashback Ends

That memory was so sweet that she couldn’t resist and started smiling even in such conditions.

“Congratulations Mr. Khurana. This bungalow is yours now.”

Maan’s lawyer and assistant complete the formalities and all bidders left one after another. Geet was trying to leave but he held her wrist and brought her with full force to face him.

“Where are you leaving Mrs. Raisinghania?” His jaw clenched hard.

“Let me go Maan.” She said without looking at him.

Maan smirked and left her wrist. “Chhod diya.” He said in a sarcastic tone.

Geet finally glanced up at her. She starts walking but his words glue her feet to the ground.

“You sell this final property too. Now how will you manage the expenses to save your ailing husband?” He hit the target.

Geet was numb and disturbed both. Maan walked to her. “I know your husband loaded you with debts. Now what will you do?”

“I don’t know.” She said.

“Hmm. Bad isn’t it. But I have an offer for you. If you are interested in it.”

“Thank you. But I don’t need any offers from you?” She is still trying to run away from him.

Maan held her and pushed her to him. “Why? Or you get bored of your not so rich husband. Once you left me from him. Now for whom you are ready to let him die?” There was so much rage and bitterness in his words and eyes.

Geet could clearly witness both. No one knew him better than her. Not even himself.

Geet silently glanced at him. “Maan i won’t let you stoop low. No matter how much you hate me. But I won’t let that Maan die to whom I love immensely.” Geet thought but didn’t voice out anything.

“Maan let me go. Please.”

Maan chuckled softly. “Please… Wow very nice. My offer is still open. Be my keep and I will pay all the expenses of your dying husband.” He whispered in her ears and left her hand.

Geet knew it already that’s why she said no to him before he even spoke out about his offer. Geet walked away without saying a word to him.

Maan was frustrated. He hit his car in frustration. “Geet aana to tumhe padega mere pas wapis. I won’t let you go this time. Apni marzi se nahi to majburi se hi sahi.” He put on his shades and sat in his car to leave from there.

“Aman I need all the information about her. Keep eyes on her every moment and yes make sure she will not get money or any help. No job no aid.” Maan commands his PA and hee nodded yes before he entered into his building.

Geet has now come back to her old flat. Thankfully this flat is still saved for shelter. Or else her husband’s whole property sold to repay all the debts.

She wants to cry but is trying to stay strong for herself. She is alone in this whole world. “The one whom I made my protector has become the biggest enemy today.” She said and her eyes welled up.

Night isn’t peaceful for anyone. Both were in pain. The reason is the same.

Jo Dil Mein Bhara Tune
Dekhegi Uss Zeher Ko
Bhugtegi Mere Gham Ko
Meri Aah Ke Kahar Ko
Apni Khudgarzi Ka
Ab Anzaam Dekhegi

Thukra Ke Mera Pyaar
Mera Intkam Dekhegi
Thukra Ke Mera Pyaar
Mera Intkam Dekhegi

Chahat Ka Sila Zaalim
Matlab Hi Diya Tune
Majboor Na Thi Phir Bhi
Dhokha Kiya Tune

Nafrat Ko Meri Ab Tu
Subah Shaam Dekhegi
Thukra Ke Mera Pyaar
Mera Intqam Dekhegi

Thukra Ke Mera Pyaar
Mera Intqam Dekhegi..

Tune Har Sitam Jo Mujhpe
Kuch Soch Ke Kiya
Kudrat Ne Sila Uska

Aakhir Tujhe Diya Hai

Duniya Shikast Teri
Sar-e-aam Dekhegi
Thukra Ke Mera Pyar
Mera Intqam Dekhegi
Thukra Ke Mera Pyar
Mera Intqam Dekhegi

Anyone could say Maan is doing Tai chi. But it was his only way to deal with his pain. He was hurt and broken badly. It wasn’t easy for him to accept her betrayal.

Tears rolled out from his eyes too. As he was alone this time. No one is near to see his tears.


Comments

22 responses to “Broken Hearts 2 Updated Part – 1”

  1. Omg,what a painful part..maan n Geet are in pain..I think geet did not betray maan.There should be something that made her sacrifice her love.. I still can feel their love. Pls cont soon.tq

    1. Nice update..
      Geet is selling her husband’s properties to clear debts..
      maan brought the property , he was angry..
      geet’s betrayal him and now he want to punish her . .
      waiting for next update..

  2. Nisha Avatar
    Nisha

    Congratulations baby for new story 🥳
    super interesting and painful update . looks like geet betrayed maan and married someone else and now selling her husband’s properties to clear debts. maan is a super rich person now and bought her property, he was angry and broken badly , geet’s betrayal made him like this and now he want to punish her . curious to know why geet left him …
    eagerly waiting for next part .

  3. Congrats baby for BH season 2 🎉🥳
    awesome and interesting start . geet married someone else for some reason and now sell properties to clear debts . maan came in the picture and bought her property but its clear both knew each other very well , in fact they loved each other but geet betrayed him and her betrayal broke his heart badly , now he want revenge , but I think maan still loves her that’s why he want her near him .
    waiting for next

  4. Fabulous and interesting story looks like geet betrayed maan but there can be a reason as geet may not go at d back of money maan is full of bitterness to make her come to him by hook or crook looks like both r hurt and broken only each other’s love can heal them waiting to see wat is more in store for geet how much she have to hear and how will both the broken hearts be mended lookout forward for this story

  5. Congratulations on your new story…well completely loved this part where maaneet portion was explained and the two souls are suffering in pain…well one is suffering from betrayal the other one is suffering from hurting the person whom she still loves…
    Their flashback was so cute… waiting to know what made them both to part ways… waiting to read more ❤️

  6. coderlady Avatar
    coderlady

    Maan and Geet have a history. They were in love once. Geet left him and married someone else, breaking his heart. Now her husband is broke and sick. She is selling off property to pay off debts. Maan is rich and buys the property and offers her to become his mistress.

    He will make it hard for her to turn anywhere but him. He will humiliate her to get back at her.

    Geet might have had reasons for marrying the other guy. She still loves him, that is obvious. What were her reasons?

  7. Congratulations for the new story
    I haven’t read the 1st first so i hope it is not related

    Loved the update
    Both hide their pain in front of each other one by anger and another by understanding
    what brought them to this chapter of their life and geet is married??

  8. Priyanka Dwivedi Avatar
    Priyanka Dwivedi

    Interesting concept… Loved the song, depicts their emotions very well… I think geet still loves him than why she left him is the mystery… Waiting for more

  9. khwaishfan Avatar
    khwaishfan

    Hi Richa…
    Hope you are well
    Congrats on the new story and Season 2 of Broken Dreams
    Thank you for posting and for the pm

    Part 1
    Amazing update… greatly written
    well Maan bought the mansion that belonged to Geet and her husband
    now Maan hates Geet
    so Geet still loves Maan
    but he is no longer the same Maan she fell in love with
    of cos Geet knows that Maan is back to punish her
    Past well incorporated
    they were so in love and happy
    eager to know what happened?
    was she helpless?
    as expected Maan taunted Geet
    how will she manage everything
    Gosh Maan had an offer for Geet
    alas she refused
    not surprised with Maan’s anger and comment
    can understand that Geet does not want Maan to stoop low
    she indeed knew what his offer is
    Maan’s frustration was justified
    Maan is clearly determined to have Geet in his life even if by force
    despite everything, he still loves Geet
    Maan wants all information on Geet
    he certainly does not want Geet to get any help
    feeling for Geet
    upset that both Maan and Geet are in pain and all alone
    Maan believes that she betrayed him
    however there is more to this than meets the eye

    update soon

  10. Congratulation on your New Story….🥳🥳Awesome start…🥰
    Maan entry as always Outstanding…
    Geet got shock to see him…
    But she knew he is back for revenge from her…
    Maan offer her but Geet already denied his any type of offer…
    But he is ready to make him come back to him by hook or crook…
    Both r in pain…
    Past memory are beautiful…
    Looking forward to know who is Mr Rai singhania?
    For whom Geet left Maan…
    Looking forward to know…
    I love this song …
    Totally fitted the situation…

  11. Congrats for new story 👏
    Very emotional update
    Maaneet are so much in pain
    Geet is married with someone else
    I thought their is a reason behind it
    But Maan think that she betrayed him
    So he wants to take revenge with her
    Loved the small glimpse of flashback 😍

  12. 🥳💥😃 congratulations 👏 for new story
    geet raisinghania
    So as per maan view she cheat him and married with someone else
    Now he wants her by hook or crook
    Interesting
    Her husband last property also sold
    Waiting for flashback
    Actually what happens between both

  13. loveaparna3011 Avatar
    loveaparna3011

    very painful
    maan n geet both have past which is sweet but with border of betray
    both are in pain
    geet thinks maan as her protector but what turns him to her destroyer

  14. Gudiyeet Avatar
    Gudiyeet

    Nice update
    Maan came geet shocking maan bought her buglaw geet know him very well he came for take revenge to her maan offered to her but she denied whatever he offer to her in past maanneet know each other present maan still now je did not forget her betrayed him he ordered his man following her what she do don’t fond her job and no one help her anyways he too crying thinking her geet have only flat for her waiting for next update

  15. A Curious Start

    Maan and Geet were in a relationship years back
    and it seems now at present Maan still wants Geet
    though he does not show that
    Geet is married and selling off her husband’s assets to pay off debt
    what did Geet do that she betrayed Maan
    and it seems like both still yearn for each other
    so Maan is going to make it impossible for Geet to obtain money
    and that will be one way she has to come to him

  16. tulipflower Avatar
    tulipflower

    Congratulations for your new story.
    Maan & geet were in a relationship and now both are in pain whereas both are now dealing with the consequences of the past action. It’s interesting to know what has happened in the past and what made them to seperate from each other.
    Eagerly waiting to read the next update.

  17. Lovely start. Waiting to know their story and what made them like this now ❤ ❤ Wounded lover, hell bent of revenge for betrayal (was it really betrayal) … so many looming questions.. all set and ready for a new Maaneet journey.

    1. Zainab Sabri Avatar
      Zainab Sabri

      Wow… Super excited!!! Few days back I was just wondering that you shared the teaser few months back n see you just update.. What a coincidence I was just thinking it’s been too long you haven’t thought about broken heart season 2 I was planning to ask from you n seee you updated! !! Concept seems to be very interesting… Geet left maan for money I don’t know but I feel there is something hidden from maan… Seems they were deeply in love with e@h other than what happened in their past that the 2 lovers got separated… Their past moments were very precious…!!! Msk entry was just awesome babe 👏🏻👏🏻 as always when you add videos n pic pura flat kar deti Ho😉 maan is hurt he isn’t showing but his pain is talking with geet.. Geet also know that he is none than her maan… Maan wants her to accept his deal n come back in his life as a keep so he want geet to be financially so weak that she has nothing to do just to accept his condition… Last scene was painful… He can hide tears but can’t stop to flow them out… Can’t wait for their past revealation … I liked the geet concern for maan tooo… She knows too much about him.. His emotions and feelings too… I think there must be some solid reason behind their separation… Ufff can’t wait…!!!

    2. Zainab Sabri Avatar
      Zainab Sabri

      Wow… Super excited!!! Few days back I was just wondering that you shared the teaser few months back n see you just update.. What a coincidence I was just thinking it’s been too long you haven’t thought about broken heart season 2 I was planning to ask from you n seee you updated! !! Concept seems to be very interesting… Geet left maan for money I don’t know but I feel there is something hidden from maan… Seems they were deeply in love with e@h other than what happened in their past that the 2 lovers got separated… Their past moments were very precious…!!! Msk entry was just awesome babe 👏🏻👏🏻 as always when you add videos n pic pura flat kar deti Ho😉 maan is hurt he isn’t showing but his pain is talking with geet.. Geet also know that he is none than her maan… Maan wants her to accept his deal n come back in his life as a keep so he want geet to be financially so weak that she has nothing to do just to accept his condition… Last scene was painful… He can hide tears but can’t stop to flow them out… Can’t wait for their past revealation … I liked the geet concern for maan tooo… She knows too much about him.. His emotions and feelings too… I think there must be some solid reason behind their separation… Ufff can’t wait…!!

  18. ne1234 Avatar
    ne1234

    Both are in pain,she has no hard feelings for him,he wants her at any cost and he is adamant on doing that.What made her left him in the past,it will not be any small matter as she took that step irrespective of her love towards him, looking forward to see how the journey will be turned out,is there any ways to mend their heart..

    1. monikaranidr5 Avatar
      monikaranidr5

      Congratulations on your new story!!

      That was a great start of the story.
      Furious Maan and helpless Geet..
      They were lovers in past but now Geet is married to someone else, which is the reason for the changed Maan in the present.
      Poor Geet, she had to sell off the property and take care of her husband’s health expenses..
      Now that Maan is back, she is scared of him doing something that he might regret later.
      But on the other hand Maan is determined to get her back.
      Both are in pain, but what had caused her to marry someone else when she loved him! Maan thinks it to be because of money but Geet’s emotions says something else.
      It seems she was forced to marry and not on her will.
      Can’t wait to know what had happened in the past and what Geet would do now.. Will they ever be able to get together..
      Thanks for the amazing update.. Waiting for more😀

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